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Black Darkness

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Black.
The void around me,
a heavy cloak,
suffocating me.

The darkness around me,
it's confining me.
much better than walls ever could.

I can't move on,
I can't stay still.
I'll never flee the room.

The darkness it's inside me,
my only enemy.
Someday someone will be
the light needed to save me.
I just wrote this one for no reason, which rarely happens with me.
Kudos for those, who notice that I was listening to boulevard of broken dreams while I wrote this.
© 2012 - 2024 iroNoNiji
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dawn181's avatar
I find the title to be rather redundant. Most darkness is black, so the added adjective is unneeded.

Over all, I like the concept of this piece.